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Date: Sat, 24 Jan 1998 00:38:58 -0800
From: Alex Cohen <alex@mminternet.com>
To: dspisak@nonmundane.org
Subject: Errors, errors, errors!

    I went through and edited this e-mail you got.... I think this guy must have just barely made it through 4th grade; even THEY are taught the difference between "there" and "their". He seems to prove the theory that Fry's employees are hired off the street.

Dear mr Daniel,

     Instead of gripping (sp. - griping) about Fry's polices why dont you try looking around for electronic stores that carry as much stuff as they do. You know why you dont (gr. - missing punctuation AND two unseparated clauses)
it's because you can't you have to go to at least 3 stores to find eveything you were looking for (should be new clause separated by semicolon or period; ended clause with prepostion) and not to mention the low prices on all of there stuff. Ya sure so things are expensive but the prices 90 percent of the store are so competive (sp. - competitive)(should have coordinator-either a comma or "that")you won't find a better price any where. You shuold (sp.- should) also look at that if you go to another store your going to get salsemen (sp. -salesmen) who don't know anything (new clause should be separated by semicolon) thats going to happpen everywhere. It's not there (sp.-their)fault that you (missing verb) incompantant (sp.-incompetent; misuse) and don't know what it is you need (new clause should be separated by semicolon) they are not mind readers. And one other (subordinate clause should be separated by period or colon) thing try going to another store and return something and see how
much they charge you for a reshelfing fee for the product. I'd rather wait a while than lose money.(what relevance does this have?)
    I also(gr.-as it is, it implies that YOU are an emloyee; adverb should be placed after verb) am an employee of FRY'S ElLECTRONICS(sp.- Fry's Electronics). if(beginning of sentence should be capitalized) you worked there for a while and see all the scams and stealing of products you would understand why are polices (sp.- policies)are the way they are. So if you have a problem then forget about use (unclear) and spend more money and time looking for what you need for low prices at another store (descriptive subordinate clause should be separated by comma) which you wont find.

thank you for you time of(wrong preposition) reading this letter.

Sincerly(sp.- sincerely),

Brad of San Diego, CA

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